雅思大作文花钱保护野生动物，雅思大作文范文-野生动物保护

试题：
Wild animals have no place in the 21st century, so protecting them is a waste of resources. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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译者：野生在21世纪末没有用武之地，为保护它是对天然资源的节约。你在多某种程度上一致同意或不一致同意？
类型：一致同意是否类
热门话题：社会风气类-动物为保护类
关键字： wild animals, have no place, a waste of resources

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分析：
责任编辑讨论的关键点在于1）野生是否除了存活的内部空间 2）是否如果充分调动人类文明现有的各种天然资源去为保护它。一致同意方须要写下：即便在21世纪末野生也很关键，它有权利存活也有足够的内部空间供给它存活，为保护它并非节约天然资源；而驳斥方则须要深入研究：在21世纪末他们不须要野生了，人类文明如果用有限的天然资源全力以赴发展自己，而非投入到野生为保护。注意你的态度一定要如上所述。
不知道小伙伴们有没有发现，托福诗歌创作其实一直很紧随社会风气热点，前一阵澳大利亚火灾引发了现代人对于环境为保护，气候变化的重视，然后在今年初1月11日的笔试中，就考察了环境为保护类。最近面对新冠病原体禽流感，乱食野生那个热门话题也开始引发现代人极大的关注，预示着着动物为保护类的试题也很可能会再次回到托福诗歌创作各科上。
野生和他们人类文明一起生活在火星上，同为火星闭环关键的核心人物，可惜由于人类文明的恣意滥杀，许多亚种已经绝灭（some species are on the edge of complete distinction），野生的数目也在逐渐减少。而人类文明，因为对野生的不认同，不悲悯也得到了惩处，03年的SARS，非洲的埃博拉病原体，除了今天的新冠病原体都与野生密切相关。这让小贴士不禁想起2019年国家地理电视频道公司出品的一部影集《血疫（The Hot Zone）》中的这段话：“When she falls ill her husband or her daughter tends to her. 当她患病时，她的妻子或儿子会照顾她（而妻子和儿子也可能因此得病） The Ebola virus spreads when we show each other love, kindness, affection. When we are most human. 当他们互相展现出爱，正直和感情的时候, 当他们展现出他们最本性的一面时，埃博拉病原体就会传播。” 野生从来都不会 have no place，21世纪末和以前没有什么不同，它的occasion都和他们人类文明密切相关，毕竟火星闭环中的任何核心人物出现了问题，单厢带来整个闭环的大动荡不安。人类文明及时采取措施，为保护野生，防范Chinian，就是在为保护他们自己。

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为大家总结一下那个试题可以写的许多白点：
态度：disagree -不一致同意试题中的看法
21st century should be the right time to make the planet Earth livable for all species
Wild animals play an important role in balancing our ecosystem and stabilizing natural processes.
展毛的野生必要性，看法1：pollination process (传粉过程)
Wild birds, bats, squirrels and bees enable fruit trees fertilization process and the production of seeds.By helping pollination process wild animals ensure that we have forests and woodlands. And from these forests we are able to build houses for shelter, furniture for comfort living.展毛的野生必要性，看法2：insect population control ( 控制鼠类数目)
Animals play significant role in insect population control. Also, animals improve aesthetics of the earth in general. If there were no animals on our planet, for instance, the world would not be as colourful and different as it is today.野生是否真的须要他们帮助？他们须要采取措施为保护野生的原因：
Climate Change: Global warming causes dangerous changes to the landscape of our planet. These changes impact wild animals and their habitat.Unregulated Hunting: Unregulated hunting and poaching causes the decline in the particular animals’ species. It is a major threat to wild animals.Deforestation: People continuously develop, grow and expand their businesses. Sometimes it means invasion of wildlife habitat.

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好啦，分析了这么多，咱们来看精选箴吧，前考官Simon老师的9分箴：
箴分析：
Some people argue that it is pointless to spend money on the protection of wild animals because we humans have no need for them. I completely disagree with this point of view.
（开头段简明扼要，背景介绍引出热门话题+个人看法的明确表达- 关键点1：it is pointless to do sth 那个主语从句句型大家可以学习哦关键点2：一致同意是否类型的文章请大家一定记住-开头要明确表明态度）
In my opinion, it is absurd to argue that wild animals have no place in the 21st century. I do not believe that planet Earth exists only for the benefit of humans, and there is nothing special about this particular century that means that we suddenly have the right to allow or encourage the extinction of any species. Furthermore, there is no compelling reason（compelling形容词- 强有力的，不可抗拒的） why we should let animals die out. We do not need to exploit or destroy every last square metre of land in order to feed or accommodate the world’s population（好搭配-提供给现代人吃喝的替换性说法）. There is plenty of room for us to exist side by side with wild animals, and this should be our aim.
（主体1段：深入研究中踩了两个点，一个是权利，动物存活的权利；第二个是必要性，深入研究是否真的没有地方给野生了，是不是有必要让它灭绝 --- 这一段都是在深入研究关键字：have no place）
I also disagree with the idea that protecting animals is a waste of resources. （看法）It is usually the protection of natural habitats that ensures the survival of wild animals, and most scientists agree that these habitats are also crucial for human survival. （解释）For example, rainforests produce oxygen, absorb carbon dioxide and stabilise the Earth’s climate. If we destroyed these areas, the costs of managing the resulting changes to our planet would far outweigh the costs of conservation（为保护，protection的一致同意替换词）. （举例）By protecting wild animals and their habitats, we maintain the natural balance of all life on Earth.（总结）
(主体2段：为保护野生的同时也为保护了他们人类文明 -这一段的结构是：看法-解释-举例-总结- 这一段的结构写的非常好，详细而具体，非常值得小伙伴们借鉴，请仿写那个结构哦--- 本段深入研究关键字：a waste of resources)
In conclusion, we have no right to decide whether or not wild animals should exist, and I believe that we should do everything we can to protect them.
(结尾重申看法，进行总结)
Source： By Simon- from http://ielts-simon.com
好词
1. 常用词Reason的高分修饰词：
Compelling（强有力的）/ convincing（令人信服的，有说服力的） / plausible（貌似可行的） / adequate（足够的/恰当的）/ sufficient （充分的）/ sound （好的，合理的）/ primary（主要的，最关键的，最基本的）/ principal（主要的）/ justifiable（有道理的）+ reason
2. Feed 动词：为…提供食物；养活
托福诗歌创作中的应用：
Feed the world/starving.养活全世界／饥饿的人
段落深入研究小知识点：
今天他们这篇箴的主体2段的结构写的非常好，这种结构在考官箴段落中比较常见，因为这种‘看法-解释-举例-分析’‘看法-解释-举例-总结’或者‘看法-解释-后果1-后果2’的结构可以把一个看法说透，不容易出现看法含糊不清的情况，推荐以后在题目中进行使用，在6-7分的评分标准中提到一个词语叫做overgeneralise:
presents, extends and supports main ideas, but there may be a tendency to overgeneralise and/or supporting ideas may lack focus
这种结构可以帮助避免overgeneralise的出现，同时符合了高分文章中的relevant, extended and supported ideas
再为大家提供一个参考的例子：
However, I would argue that these benefits are outweighed by the drawbacks. （主题句）Gaming can be highly addictivebecause children are constantly given scores, new targets and frequent rewards to keep them playing（看法）. Many children now spend hours each day trying to progress through the levels of a game or to get a higher score than their friends（解释）. This type of addiction can have effects ranging from lack of sleep to problems at school, when homework is sacrificed for a few more hours on the computer or console（后果1）.Also，the rise in childhood obesity in recent years has also been linked in part to the sedentary lifestyle and lack of exercise that often accompany children’s gaming addiction（后果2）.
（红笔字为好词）
好啦，今天的箴分析咱们可是讲了好多的干货，是不是觉得收获满满呢

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快点打开笔记本记录好词好句和诗歌创作关键点吧。禽流感当前，希望大家都能健康平安的在家好好复习，待到托福复考时，都能取得心仪成绩

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托福诗歌创作一致同意是否类其它箴
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托福诗歌创作动物为保护类其它箴
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